Prez art --- Birds of Prey

[President]

Thanks for the feedback on my first post. Here's my 2cd......

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5165/blackcanaryprezor5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Black Canary

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5174/huntressprezpc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Huntress

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2938/birdsofpreyprezpj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Birds of Prey

Thanks for looking tell me what you think...

[mdbruffy]

They look great- be better when they're inked. But...Isn't this the wrong website for these girls? Wouldn't DC's website be better?

[Richard Pace]

Pretty decent work.

Fix some of your consistent weaknesses and you should be getting serious offers of work soon.

I'm gonna assume that no one's talked to you about tangents and some of your cropping issues yet, so:

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e178/richardpace/workovers/birdsofpreyprezpj6.jpg


Batgirl's knee ends right at Huntress's head-thingie - creates an uncomfortable visual link that you should avoid.
BG's shin runs parallel to the back of Black Canary's head in addition to meeting the wall right by BC's head.
BC's elbow is just barely on the page and is bisected by that terribly thin strip of background
the tip of BC's jacket is leaving the composition for no good reason
BC's right leg, as well as
. . .Huntress' right. . .
. . .and left legs are all cropped at the knee. Avoid awkwardly cropping limbs -- especially at the joint or in the middle of a hand or foot.


The key thing to remember -- you're the artist and everything on the page is absolutely under your control. Tangents (odd visual meetings or overlaps in composition) happen in real life all the time, but should be avoided since they create unwanted visual noise that distracts from the actual work.

It's looking good - -keep it up!

~Richard

[estee]

Great stuff. :)

[KrAzYeTy]

Your style remind me of Liefeld a little.

A little big on the limbs and boobs!

My fav is the second pic.....

No doubt you have some serious talent!

[magnus robot fighter]

he certainly does the first two pics reminded me of the jlu episode grudge match